throughout the night
the stream mumbled
to itself
using words only it
understood
black starry sky
slowly, slowly
fades to silver gray
rousing the forest
birds jostle
raucously
trying to be heard
squirrels
dart
from tree to tree
silently
chipmunks lock
in territorial battle
bounding comically
sunlight
lazy, lazy,
flows down
the mountainsides
awakening colors,
filling the meadow
with golden light
a hummingbird
hovers
in a beam of sunlight
listening to
the whispers
of the stream
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Beautiful Math. My favorite
Beautiful Math. My favorite stanza
sunlight
lazy, lazy,
flows down
the mountainsides
awakening colors,
filling the meadow
with golden light
Very good Math. I'm with
Very good Math. I'm with Crazy on the stanza fave.
Daniel
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Ahhh, who uses names... Hey
Ahhh, who uses names... Hey honey!!! You're so flipping cute... love this one.
lol Terri.. "Whomever you are"
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Travelling all day. Now sitting around visiting family. That is the best stanza. I could almost chop off the rest, and just keep the part where the sunlight is slowly oozing down the mountainside.
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